Reflective writing from one Fall 2010 English 104 class, based on class activities, discussions, and readings. As E. M. Forster once said, "How can I know what I think until I see what I say?"
I thought your clip was really good, really creative and good visuals. One thing that you can improve maybe would be the story line with Carl(?)and the rest of the images that come after. But really, it was very good.
I really enjoyed your video! You did an excellent job in turning your academic paper into a nice video that any general audience could understand. The video showed you really did your research and it was very entertaining! Though I have to agree with a previous comment, maybe give a warning about the gross images. Overall it was a great video!
You did a great job on your video! I loved your voice over and character development. It was a lot more striking when you showed the brutal photos near the end. I think you got your point across. You put a lot of effort into it and really did an awesome job.
This was really creative idea. It was a little disturbing ,but in a good way. Your choice of music was very good. The recommendation I might give to you is to perhaps cut out the scene of bloody chickens
I really enjoyed your video. It had a pretty funny outlook although the topic is serious.
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ReplyDeleteI thought the humor was well placed with the photos to mix funny and dark. Well done.
ReplyDeletevery well done with funny voices
ReplyDeleteI thought the video was funny and it had a good topic as well.
ReplyDeleteI thought your clip was really good, really creative and good visuals. One thing that you can improve maybe would be the story line with Carl(?)and the rest of the images that come after. But really, it was very good.
ReplyDeleteI liked the humor you brought to a serious subject that you feel strongly about.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed the creativity of your video.
ReplyDeleteMaybe warn us of some of the graphic images.
I thought it was very good. Maybe give a warning that so of the photos will be gross
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your video! You did an excellent job in turning your academic paper into a nice video that any general audience could understand. The video showed you really did your research and it was very entertaining! Though I have to agree with a previous comment, maybe give a warning about the gross images. Overall it was a great video!
ReplyDeleteI loved it anything that makes other people laugh is a success
ReplyDeleteyou put a lot of effort into the video! I really enjoyed it, and thought it was unique.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job, and it was funny and kept my interest.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your video! I loved your voice over and character development. It was a lot more striking when you showed the brutal photos near the end. I think you got your point across. You put a lot of effort into it and really did an awesome job.
ReplyDeleteThis was really creative idea. It was a little disturbing ,but in a good way. Your choice of music was very good. The recommendation I might give to you is to perhaps cut out the scene of bloody chickens
ReplyDeleteFunny video. Still didn't persuade me to not eat chicken. It's just to yummy.
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